Comments on: Severing http://www.voicesoa.net/severing/ An Orions' Arm E-zine Wed, 03 Feb 2010 14:12:01 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Todd http://www.voicesoa.net/severing/comment-page-1/#comment-461 Todd Sun, 29 Oct 2006 23:54:50 +0000 http://www.voicesoa.net/severing/#comment-461 Wow. Jo, I am once again impressed. I bow down to you! It's such a privilege for me to know you. Fantastic work on "Severing"; that kind of writing always does something to me. I'm still only on the first page, but just had to send my initial thoughts. Do you share those links just so I can praise you? :) I feel something rise up inside of me when I read material like that; before I even know it my skin is flushed and I'm smiling. When I catch myself smiling, I know I am REALLY enjoying a story. Hats off to you, my girl! Awesome! I always love the way you come up with details, sights, feel, colors. I could see everything, from the orange ammonia to miner's ships (black dots in the atmosphere) to the jets firing, acceleration numbers, and all that. On top of everything, it's not always easy (at least not for all writers or would-be writers) to turn something virtual into something physically visible that one can feel. You have an obvious penchant for it. Thanks for sharing that link and adding a little thrill to my day. --T Wow. Jo, I am once again impressed. I bow down to you! It’s such a privilege for me to know you. Fantastic work on “Severing”; that kind of writing always does something to me. I’m still only on the first page, but just had to send my initial thoughts. Do you share those links just so I can praise you? :)

I feel something rise up inside of me when I read material like that; before I even know it my skin is flushed and I’m smiling. When I catch myself smiling, I know I am REALLY enjoying a story. Hats off to you, my girl! Awesome! I always love the way you come up with details, sights, feel, colors. I could see everything, from the orange ammonia to miner’s ships (black dots in the atmosphere) to the jets firing, acceleration numbers, and all that. On top of everything, it’s not always easy (at least not for all writers or would-be writers) to turn something virtual into something physically visible that one can feel. You have an obvious penchant for it.

Thanks for sharing that link and adding a little thrill to my day.

–T

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