Comments on: Novella Entry: The Devoted Follower http://www.voicesoa.net/novella-entry-the-devoted-follower/ An Orions' Arm E-zine Thu, 21 Jul 2011 19:20:55 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.5 By: Don White http://www.voicesoa.net/novella-entry-the-devoted-follower/comment-page-1/#comment-32855 Don White Sat, 29 Nov 2008 21:20:51 +0000 http://www.voicesoa.net/novella-entry-the-devoted-follower/#comment-32855 This is a good start. The writing is clean and unpretentious. It sets a mood that I didn't expect in an OA story. At this stage I don't know if the novella will concentrate on Jakani, or if it will be story about Chamoska as seen through the prejudiced eyes of Jakani. The whole chapter builds up to the explosive last line. Whichever way the story goes, I knew I had to read more. A good first chapter with a very strong hook that compels the reader to continue to chapter two, and more. This is a good start. The writing is clean and unpretentious. It sets a mood that I didn’t expect in an OA story. At this stage I don’t know if the novella will concentrate on Jakani, or if it will be story about Chamoska as seen through the prejudiced eyes of Jakani. The whole chapter builds up to the explosive last line. Whichever way the story goes, I knew I had to read more.

A good first chapter with a very strong hook that compels the reader to continue to chapter two, and more.

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