http://www.voicesoa.net/novella-entry-diversion-tactics/ An Orions' Arm E-zine Sun, 25 Jul 2010 05:36:52 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 http://www.voicesoa.net/novella-entry-diversion-tactics/comment-page-1/#comment-32859 Don White Sun, 30 Nov 2008 23:57:09 +0000 http://www.voicesoa.net/novella-entry-diversion-tactics/#comment-32859 DIVERSION TACTICS This is a great first chapter. It has action and shows Ines' reaction to events. Good story telling from the start. The scientific details of water in zero Gee and vacuum are accurate, so I immediately have confidence in the author. We see human beings I can relate to reacting to events, instead of being told about happenings by some distant impersonal voice. Unlike so many OA stories, the stress is on actions and feelings of people, not on machines trying to act human. I think I am going to like this story. DIVERSION TACTICS
This is a great first chapter. It has action and shows Ines’ reaction to events. Good story telling from the start. The scientific details of water in zero Gee and vacuum are accurate, so I immediately have confidence in the author. We see human beings I can relate to reacting to events, instead of being told about happenings by some distant impersonal voice. Unlike so many OA stories, the stress is on actions and feelings of people, not on machines trying to act human. I think I am going to like this story.

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