http://www.voicesoa.net/issue-eleven-the-novella-contest-edition-october-2008-39-at/ An Orions' Arm E-zine Sun, 25 Jul 2010 05:36:52 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 http://www.voicesoa.net/issue-eleven-the-novella-contest-edition-october-2008-39-at/comment-page-1/#comment-32857 Don White Sun, 30 Nov 2008 20:17:50 +0000 http://www.voicesoa.net/issue-eleven-the-novella-contest-edition-october-2008-39-at/#comment-32857 Diversion Tactics Great start. Vivid and clear writing. The author's description of how water acts in zero gravity and vacuum are clear and correct. I have confidence the author knows what he's talking about. I have a hint about what's going on in the ship, and this first chapter makes me want to read more to find out. I think I'll have a good story to read. Diversion Tactics
Great start. Vivid and clear writing. The author’s description of how water acts in zero gravity and vacuum are clear and correct. I have confidence the author knows what he’s talking about. I have a hint about what’s going on in the ship, and this first chapter makes me want to read more to find out. I think I’ll have a good story to read.

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